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Aubade in Queens: A Transfer
the sky, a cabinet polished,
painted, then sanded again
bluish grey all the way down
where everything melts into
lemon sherbert yellow
the families on the 7
sway and fuss on the curves
gather the growing light around them
clack-clack
loudspeaker static over seagulls‘ shriek:
Queensboro Plaza
doors open, mothers hum into the busy air,
singing and scattering, each with her
own peculiar tune; Farsi, Spanish, Creole,
Korean, Greek
black winter coats burst at the zippers
reveal red and gold robes
tucked flannel shirts
tiny pink tees with ponies
grab my hand say one hundred mothers
to a hundred and fifty children
they tighten back packs
smooth down sly cowlicks
turn toward the innumerable questions
of tiny upturned faces --
pulling the light into their palms
they step into the trains again
5 comments:
I really like this--maybe cut the sway and fuss on the curves so more of the emphasis is on the light as it moves through the stanzas.
Congratulations on your publication.
Thanks and welcom Pamela! Yeah, I was thinking that the beginning was a little too much.
I agree with Pamela. I really like the images in this, and I thought the second to last stanza was great.
Thanks, Val. Good point.
A lovely portrait of endurance in the midst of endless transition.
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