Children Having Trouble With Meat
they're not sure?
the fork makes an
interesting clang when they bang it
on the rim of the plate
in the center
there's something?
it makes no noise when they hit
it with their fork
not even a grunt
although when they hold their ear
very close
to its burning smell
there is a wet
hiss
3 comments:
I think the Kids/Food chapbook is a good idea.
I like the tone of this poem. The last two stanzas are my favorite.
Thanks! I'm not sure what you mean by stanza; it's sort of just lines.
This is a very good read. And good luck for the comedy thingy. Give 'em hell, then come and tell us how they took it.
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