Okay, now all that hand wringing is out of the way about nothing happening soon enough -- I just got this from a publisher I submitted my book manuscript to:
christine,I love what you did here. Time and narration as a seeming transparent voice but the voice has a bad breath that gives birth to visions and a very strong strong stronger voice that could at first have been suspected. The poems go back and forth and right thru one another. It's such a clean and unique collection as if it could go on forever, the discovering and then digging into time to find a passage and then the vision and then the voice resting again. A great dreaming circle.