A Tender Age
in this corner, a dog is screaming
he is calling your name
Oliver, Oliver
you have better things to do
you in your urchin shirt
rusty shoes, hat full
of night and spiders
you sneak the hubcaps
off dead men’s eyes
you borrow morning
ransom it for some
chilled red soup
you tuck bracelets, brooches,
feathered hat pins in your pockets
they clank an odd song when you run
they rub together like bones in your thin
shoulder joint
no meat
no meat
for the strangers’ mouths
for the dog still barking
for the profiles made of metal and gems
when the street lights pop on
so many bad ideas over so many
dusty, perfumed heads
you are just getting started
your business hawking pocket watches
stealing time
and other boys’ tender teeth
7 comments:
So many great images in this one! I like the dog calling, Oliver. Clank an odd song when you run. sneak hugbaps off dead men's eyes.
Thanks Valerie!
This one was actually inspired by some (non-confessional) Plath.
Hugbaps??
Love it!
Enjoyed this a great deal, Christine. Nice work.
Thanks Collin! This one just got the smack down from Ocho. Oh well.
I like the progression of imagery here - "urchin shirt / rusty shoes, hat full / of night and spiders." Good form as well, Christine.
Favorite part:
when the street lights pop on
so many bad ideas over so many
dusty, perfumed heads
Thanks, Sam. A lot of people had trouble with the "urchin shirt", but I like it because of the repeating sounds.
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