The Subtle Suitor
you lean over the boat's metal railing
and vomit the day's stale meal, canned
cherries, pickled oranges, the salmon
from another country, as you are distracted
I cut off your braid (a souvenir) then
offer you my elbow for support
we shuffle back to your cabin, you wiping
your mouth with your pink silk sleeve
as you recline on velvet pillows, I offer you
more brandy, this time I promise
the flames will not go out, fever sweat
coats your upper lip, I unbutton your shoes,
your skin grays like the sun, your eyelashes
lick upward, settle
what kind of woman lies so easily, I ask myself
your gold rings cold, small as bird hearts, in my palm
3 comments:
I really like this one! "eyelashes lick upwards" is a great image.
Perfect.
Thanks, Valerie and Todd.
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