Hotel #7
Are you high? you whispered. The pillows hummed 
like sweet pools of lit amethysts, the sheets as smooth
 
as a girl's long, long back.  You worried about cameras 
hidden in the walls. I worried that our neighbors' mumbling
 
had a pulse, a morse-like code. Vending machines rang 
robotically, unsteadily, downstairs. Do you want me to be?
  
Your face edged by the deep blue glow of the pool at night, 
how my feet moved so slowly through it, swish, swish.
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