Are You Going to Eat This?
 after Lynn Emmanuel
Start with a dog.  This dog.  This dog wanting out
 
of this dream.  Then I see my eyes, blinded by windows, a bobby
with a talking gun, more butter and more, smearing the box, 
the bureau.
Stuffing her mouth, a servant, still.  We tell the dream.  We tell 
the maids and waitresses, we don their black aprons.  
I want to ask the stove, the glaring succotash, the hated 
cot.  Light, even
light is a dreary guest.  I see that first.
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This draft was written as part of my first assignment for my first packet at NEC -- an imitation poem.  This poem is an imitation of Lynn Emmanuel's "Dream in Which I Meet Myself".  The title and last sentence of the poem are taken directly from Lynn's piece.
 
 
1 comment:
a gun and butter in the same line is somehow very calming. Odd.
By the way, I had a slight pout when I clicked on the link to purchase Saints and Cannibals and found that it is no longer available...!
-Barry Napier
www.barrynapierwriting.wordpress.com
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