The Drowned Mouse
It's hot. So hot he sweats 
in a circle where my hand 
touches the hairy pool of his stomach. 
We are beached on top 
of the covers, pillows 
spilled and ripped 
all over the old carpet
we hauled in from the curb. 
The fan's on, 
but I feel nothing. 
Nothing seems
to move.  Why don't you love
me anymore? he says.  
I wonder where all 
the flies came from;
it's so hot and suddenly,
there's all these flies.
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Went on a lovely retreat with Dorianne Laux.  She read my book and liked it, too.
 
 
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