Here's a new poem. Surprised? Have at it -- is it boring, blah, etc.?
My Mother Draws a Horse
after the fifth time I beg and maybe
promise to clean my room
she sits at the table with the dusty lace cloth
in the mirrored yellow room used
for strangers and holidays
if I am lucky she will make it a pinto
splashes of white and black
like dark continents fixed
on a moving milky sea
the horse has her ears bent forward
concentrating on what’s just ahead
off the page
it’s always the same horse
the same size of a handprint
nostrils a little too large as if
she’s breathing hard
it’s always the same horse
and she’s always running
when my mother’s done
she bites her pinky the same way,
it’s ugly
I don’t know what I’m doing
and I smooth her hair behind her ear
so short I stand while she sits
and I whisper, it’s pretty, it’s so pretty
This is beautifully written and honest. It stands on its own, with a level, uncomplicated tone. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I worried it was a little too blah.
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