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Love is All Around
Your breath this morning, foul, loved
out the window, hammering, overlapping
chattering
my tongue so far down your throat I can
taste
Wednesday’s dinner, corn and roses
an old man in army boots stumbles down
a bright alley
marks from previous floods on the walls
stones older than Christ the hum
of flies
screech of birds, unseen
Now I lock myself in the bathroom
and shrink
I am small enough to slip under the door
sneak into the toe of your boot you will wear me
squashed and red a foolish tick
dark around the edges
shadows or burn marks in the bedroom add
contrast
the negative space of your forehead my thumb
smoothing your brows
left, right, left
It's hard to read on the blog page (It's all squinty! I'm old!) but the poem on this comment page is pretty good. A little gross on that I-can-taste-Wed.'s-meal bit. I'm assuming it's Thurs. morning.
ReplyDeleteSo you linked to my blog (sodaddictionary), thanks, I linked back. I figure you got it from Snider's blog? I think maybe I saw work there of yours once, or maybe a picture. Can't remember. Anyway, looking forward to trying to read your blog in the future -
Jason
http://www.livejournal.com/users/okokdomodomo
Thanks, Jason.
ReplyDeletehiya amy u sexy beast! :D
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