tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post116625525462999046..comments2024-03-26T17:30:19.166-04:00Comments on this is all your fault: Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-1167910820567501612007-01-04T06:40:00.000-05:002007-01-04T06:40:00.000-05:00Thanks, Valerie. I will work on that.Thanks, Valerie. I will work on that.Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-1167884771827543052007-01-03T23:26:00.000-05:002007-01-03T23:26:00.000-05:00I think the whole poem is great, but there is the ...I think the whole poem is great, but there is the part in the middle describing the girl and the dog that is a little less compelling than the rest (Although I love the barking with no sound coming out).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-1166817869946042482006-12-22T15:04:00.000-05:002006-12-22T15:04:00.000-05:00Thanks! Valerie and Sam.So the middle part about ...Thanks! Valerie and Sam.<BR/><BR/>So the middle part about the audience is where it seems to lag a bit?<BR/><BR/>Yes, "to BE barking" fixing it now!Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-1166815517746282032006-12-22T14:25:00.000-05:002006-12-22T14:25:00.000-05:00I agree with Valerie about the start, but let me a...I agree with Valerie about the start, but let me add ... the last three stanzas that close the poem are incredible.<BR/><BR/>In stanza 6 - to be barking.<BR/><BR/>I like this poem Christine.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-1166724868000631342006-12-21T13:14:00.000-05:002006-12-21T13:14:00.000-05:00Really like how this starts.Really like how this starts.Valerie Lovelandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11309299429765944601noreply@blogger.com