tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post4539791396218998449..comments2024-03-26T17:30:19.166-04:00Comments on this is all your fault: Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-88559263566141822612007-05-06T16:10:00.000-04:002007-05-06T16:10:00.000-04:00I might suggest paying attention to repetition of ...I might suggest paying attention to repetition of the word <I>assistant</I>, except for the initial reference and in the title. <BR/><BR/>I would not use it again at all in the body as it is not a particularly tender word and does not slip from the mouth without conferring a severe and sterile image. <BR/><BR/>She wants to be much more robust than that, dangerous beneath the trappings. Perhaps Joseph Gallohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04583150120590638543noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-44133093800704033062007-04-03T23:40:00.000-04:002007-04-03T23:40:00.000-04:00Thanks for commenting. I'm sending you something,...Thanks for commenting. I'm sending you something, in a few minutes.Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-74140297573746528992007-03-25T00:18:00.000-04:002007-03-25T00:18:00.000-04:00The Arthur Furst photos in the book of Anne's last...The Arthur Furst photos in the book of Anne's last summer are awesome. I got the book A year ago at some rediculious low price at a discount book store. Love it.<BR/><BR/>I like this idea... there is something, some little tweek I feel it needs, but I;m not sure what. Don't give up on it.!<BR/><BR/>Best~<BR/><BR/>MichaelMichael A. Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06015233939646285069noreply@blogger.com