tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post410526237056467974..comments2024-03-26T17:30:19.166-04:00Comments on this is all your fault: Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-24164795108438033632007-07-26T17:56:00.000-04:002007-07-26T17:56:00.000-04:00Thanks, Collin -- I was trying to make the brother...Thanks, Collin -- I was trying to make the brother and sister two parts of a whole.<BR/><BR/>Thanks, Valerie -- It was really difficult to suggest something without going over the top. I liked the pocket metaphor 'cause it's dirty.Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-14309115933473889852007-07-25T22:41:00.000-04:002007-07-25T22:41:00.000-04:00I love the stanza: "inside, the doctor is doingsom...I love the stanza: <BR/>"inside, the doctor is doing<BR/>something I wish he wouldn't<BR/>without gloves, without a nurse<BR/>he smiles as if he has found<BR/>a five dollar bill in an empty<BR/>pocket"Valerie Lovelandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11309299429765944601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-21088689040034000502007-07-25T18:50:00.000-04:002007-07-25T18:50:00.000-04:00Whoa! That last line is a gut punch. Good stuff.Whoa! That last line is a gut punch. Good stuff.Collin Kelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03777180960376039699noreply@blogger.com