tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post4023709792078612473..comments2023-08-27T10:46:12.535-04:00Comments on this is all your fault: Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-59979739170976689382007-07-19T21:50:00.000-04:002007-07-19T21:50:00.000-04:00Nick -- Yes! Plath also mentions hooks in Ariel. ...Nick -- Yes! Plath also mentions hooks in Ariel. You win the prize.<BR/><BR/>Valerie -- thanks. It would be hard for the poem have a different title, but I can see how it's boring -- it's very functional.Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-26933180123241471312007-07-18T12:11:00.000-04:002007-07-18T12:11:00.000-04:00Purloined from "Mystic" - The air is a mill of ho...Purloined from "Mystic" -<BR/> <BR/><B><I>The air is a mill of hooks</I></B><BR/><BR/><BR/>Do I pass the audition? :-)Nickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06602358126864479992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-7644082535343359832007-07-18T11:11:00.000-04:002007-07-18T11:11:00.000-04:00Lots of great images in this one. Love the part wi...Lots of great images in this one. Love the part with the hook of the air. At first I thought the title was a little boring for the poem, but it grew on me--I like it now.Valerie Lovelandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11309299429765944601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-38897125692232732572007-07-18T00:59:00.000-04:002007-07-18T00:59:00.000-04:00Thanks, Nick! Yeah, there was a sort of shift in ...Thanks, Nick! Yeah, there was a sort of shift in the middle -- I'm glad you liked it. Could you see the metaphor I stole from Plath??Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-73493543529818830412007-07-17T08:10:00.000-04:002007-07-17T08:10:00.000-04:00I like the way you work in the different tropes an...I like the way you work in the different tropes and elements in this poem. Thanks for the read.Nickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06602358126864479992noreply@blogger.com