tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post1975547132429921869..comments2024-03-26T17:30:19.166-04:00Comments on this is all your fault: Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-52222529466406463452007-04-18T23:17:00.000-04:002007-04-18T23:17:00.000-04:00Was she supposed to be the one that peed on the te...Was she supposed to be the one that peed on the teddy bear too? When I read it, I thought the brother peed both her shoes and the bear.<BR/><BR/>(The word verification for this post is "peeoglu").Valerie Lovelandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11309299429765944601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-26517542643760626002007-04-17T13:39:00.000-04:002007-04-17T13:39:00.000-04:00thanks for your comment, Valerie -Did you get that...thanks for your comment, Valerie -Did you get that she peed on her own shoes? I was trying to show how little kids don't take responsibility.Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-73000555931253826012007-04-17T00:36:00.000-04:002007-04-17T00:36:00.000-04:00Some of these lines are really funny (the peanut s...Some of these lines are really funny (the peanut shoving itself, and the multiple instances of pee).<BR/><BR/>I also really like the Blue flames from the tv.Valerie Lovelandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11309299429765944601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-85182750716133070292007-04-14T18:49:00.000-04:002007-04-14T18:49:00.000-04:00Yes, Mr. Stroll. It is meant to be a poem. But s...Yes, Mr. Stroll. It is meant to be a poem. But several people in my workshop seemed to believe that it's more of an outline for a poem, which may be the case.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the comment! I love your blog and Bitchy one too.Christine E. Hamm, Poet Professor Painterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05718251845657390735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3394939.post-48794944680143355852007-04-14T14:31:00.000-04:002007-04-14T14:31:00.000-04:00Stupid question, the lay person asks, but is this ...Stupid question, the lay person asks, but is this meant to be a poem? I like it either way. It's both giggly and a little sad. :)Strollhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12843956950261822261noreply@blogger.com